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This is the first story I read on the site. I even signed up to continue reading new chapters before they are published on Asstr.org.
I hope that one day you will find the inspiration to finish the adventures of Abi.
Your new story is great, but I miss Abi
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Thanks for saying you enjoy it and I love to finish the story but I found myself written myself in a corner with all these characters and as my first ever story I wrote I was learning about how to develop a long running story.
I do have plans of maybe writing an adventure 10 years later when Abi is now in her early 20's and have tried a few times to write that but it never quite works.
I love to know more about what you enjoy about the story or about Abi in general?
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What I love about this story is the relationship between Abi and Mark. There is of course the master-slave relationship between them where both explore their increasingly perverse fantasies. But there is also the relationship where Mark teaches Abi to accept herself as she is and guides her towards the woman she will be.
I agree with you that you have introduced too many characters around Abi and Mark and it becomes difficult to get them all involved in every chapter and club meeting.
One idea might be to create a private club within the club involving Abi, Becky, Mark, Claire and Sally where the 3 adults take their fantasies to the extreme for their pleasure and that of the girls.
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I see. I heard that from other readers when they give feedback in the relationship between Abi and Mark.
Having so many characters has been a real challenge that with working with OLe on Little Model Annie and working on Young Sluts has helped in that way. I still want to finish HT with the collaring ceremony so I might see about writing that.
The idea of private club is an interesting idea that not though about before but an interesting idea. However, I start working on a new story about Abi when she's 21 and has moved to the US and ends becoming slave to another man and teaching him to be a Master.
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Come on DATA...GET BUSY!!!!! LOL!!!!! Always love your stories
